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But how do I make it mine? 🤔
Published 1 day ago • 3 min read • Writing Tips, Helpful Solutions, Imposter Syndrome, Story Creation, Character Creation
KAT VANCIL
THE STORYTELLER'S SAGA
QUEST 150
Tell me if this sounds familiar, Reader?
“I can’t write this. It’s too similar to [insert popular retelling some author already did]. Whatever will I do? Everything’s already been written.” 🙀
The thing is, Reader, this imaginary storyteller—or not-so-imaginary one—is focusing on the wrong thing. They shouldn’t focus on how their retelling is the same as everything that already exists, but instead on how it’s different.
So when you sit down to create a new story—or fret over one you’ve already written…
Here are 3 Creative ways to make a retelling truly yours:
1) Genre Quick-Change
V for Vendetta (2005)
The simplest and yet most drastic way to make any retelling your own is by swapping out the setting for a brand new locale. Instead of a medieval Venetian city, whisk your reader away to the moon in the year 5432.
Or reimagine a classic like Herman Melville's Moby-Dick. Where dragon hunters prowl the frozen land in armored battle engines, like in Age of Dragons. (Starring Danny Glover!)
2) Changing Perspective
Moriarty the Patriot by Ryosuke Takeuchi & Hikaru Miyoshi
You could shift the story’s perspective to a side character or even someone entirely fabricated, like in Rosaline.
The movie is Shakespeare’s “Romeo and Juliet” but from the perspective of a character that never actually appears in the play itself. She’s mentioned, sure, but Rosaline never actually sets foot on stage during the course of the tragedy, and the movie Rosaline is a comedy.
You could turn the original story completely on its head, like in Moriarty the Patriot, where the Legendary Character once cast as the arch-villain is now a hero fighting to bring down the corrupt nobility and an unfair class system.
You could choose a sibling like in The Other Bennet Sister, which follows the events of Pride and Prejudice from Mary Bennet’s perspective. Or a traveling companion like in James, which retells the Adventures of Huckleberry Finn from the enslaved Jim’s POV.
3) New Representation
Cinderella is Dead by Kalynn Bayron
Does your story take a classic and infuse it with underrepresented peoples? Are your Legendary Characters neurodivergent, queer, people of color, disabled, or those living with a chronic illness?
There have been several fantastic recastings, retellings, and reimaginings of older stories recently that showcase a greater diversity of persons. From the dystopian Sapphic Fantasy Cinderella is Dead by Kalynn Bayron, to Persuasion (2022), to Mojito’s Boys Love reimagining of the ENNEAD, more publishers and directors are expanding the inclusive representation they offer in their creative works, and you can too.
Now, more than ever, is the time to expand the range of perspectives available in the world. Especially if you’re from an underrepresented group.
The important thing to remember, Reader, is that we as storytellers aren’t required to create entirely new ideas. All we truly need to do is express familiar themes in uniquely creative ways. Just like the works I mentioned here today.
Well, until next time, this is your friendly neighborhood storytelling Kat wishing you a wonderfully creative weekend.
Your cohort in storytelling,
Kat Vancil
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PS 👉 Do you have a favorite retelling of an old tale? Hit reply and share!
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Just your friendly neighborhood storytelling Kat, here to help you vanquish your story construction obstacles, slay the imposter syndrome clawing at the back of your brain, and stomp your boredom flat with heart-pounding Queer Fiction. Join the Saga and choose your inbox obsession. Whether it’s helpful weekly advice with your storytelling. Or my monthly newsletter featuring 🏳️🌈 book recommendations & chapters of my ongoing magikal Dark Academia webnovel ExSpelled, to devour during your coffee break.